Help me please, help finish my story and make it as exiting as possible?

Next day a client comes and like that painting very much and bought at good price.Since he was a young guy he putted that painting in his bed room and daily in dreams that girl(louise) start coming in his life.He again approaches Geoff to make more painting(of louise) and so on .And one day when he came to shop for new order of his choice he found louise sitting there and he was surprised as if dream comes true and he proposed her and now Geoff was in trouble to say yes or what as after marriage she was to go out of that city as that boy was studying in hostel and now completed his course and being offered good job in other city .Geoff seeing her life carrier say yes and then again start painting sale and with time see off louise with tears in his eyes and louise also could not forget Mr.Geoff who acted as her father role and faced even difficulty and heart felt feeling to make her see off